By far, essay 2 has been really enjoyable to write. I did not get a lot of my draft done because I was struggling with the structure of my essay and am being too picky about what textual evidence would fit better with my thesis and go with my supporting data. I think my essay 2 compared to essay 1 by far has more context and textual evidence to support my thesis which will make essay much stronger. I'm looking forward to getting constructive feedback from the two peers that are reading my essay. I would love any type of advice, but would really appreciate advice on a better thesis. Essay 2, here I come!
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